I just realized that the entries I'd posted to my Work-in-Progress section over on the BOTA minisite was way out of date, to the tune of over 11,000 words behind. That's a lot of words. So, I'm posting two more chapters now, and will post some more as soon as I get out from under some of these client projects. These two bring readers up through the big shoot-out scene I mentioned before. Let me know what you think!